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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Please help to correct my writing if there are any mistakes.

Short summary
In order to settle their mounting debts, the four buddies decide to venture into a robbery. Unfortunately, they get into more trouble when they somehow cross paths with a bunch of real robbers.

Long summary
Four bumbling fishermen decide to rob in order to settle their mounting debts. In their attempt, the four friends come across an actual robbery, and during the chaotic chase, they somehow end up with two bags of stolen jewelry. The four friends then emerge as the heroes of the case after surrendering only one bag of jewelry to the police. Later, the robbers from the robbery manage to locate the four buddies. Will the robbers get back the stolen jewelry?
  

Top answer

Short summary In order to settle their mounting debts, the four buddies decide to venture int o r obbery. Unfortunately, they get into more trouble when they somehow cross paths with a bunch of real robbers. Long summary Four bumbling fishermen decide to rob in order to settle their mounting debts.

  • Short summary In order to settle their mounting debts, the four buddies decide to venture int o r obbery.
  • Unfortunately, they get into more trouble when they somehow cross paths with a bunch of real robbers.
  • Long summary Four bumbling fishermen decide to rob in order to settle their mounting debts.
  • In their attempt, the four friends come across an actual robbery, and during the chaotic chase, they somehow end up with two bags of stolen jewelry.
  • The four friends then emerge as the heroes of the case after surrendering only one bag of jewelry to the police.
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Short summary
In order to settle their mounting debts, the four buddies decide to venture into robbery. Unfortunately, they get into more trouble when they somehow cross paths with a bunch of real robbers.

Long summary
Four bumbling fishermen decide to rob in order to settle their mounting debts. In their attempt, the four friends come across an actual robbery, a
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Hi teechr, thank you for your amendment. I made some revision to the long summary. Could you please look at it?

Four bumbling fishermen plan for a robbery to settle their mounting debts. In their attempt, they come across an actual robbery and end up with two bags of stolen jewelry during a chaotic chase. When they surrender one jewelry bag to the police, the authorities deem the four as
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Four bumbling fishermen plan for to stage a robbery to settle their mounting debts. In their attempt, they come across an actual robbery and end up with two bags of stolen jewelry during a chaotic chase. When they surrender one jewelry bag to the police, the authorities deem the four as to be heroes. However, the real robbers manage to locate them and demand

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