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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Hi teechr, could you please help me to check my writing? Very much appreciate your help

A pair of detective buddies from two different dimensions team up to solve a murder, which takes place 50 years ago. The duo takes up the investigation in order to find the real murderer. Along the way, as they dig up evidence and locate witnesses, they encounter men, women, as well as vengeful spirits that try to stop them from finding out the truth.
  

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Use "and" instead of "as well as."

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