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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Hi teechr, could you please help me to check my grammatical mistakes in my writing below?

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A lawyer’s blinded love to her actor boyfriend turns her life to a parade of tears until a man walks into her life and changes everything.

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Sapura is a lawyer who is in love with an actor named Eddie. Although Eddie has innumerably upset her, she has always put him in the pedestal. Seeing how much she is subconsciously hurt, her grandmother – who raises her, collaborates with Sapura's siblings to involve a much-deserving man in the successful lawyer’s life.
  

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Long description A lawyer’s blin d ed love to for her actor boyfriend turns her life int o a parade of tears until a man walks into her life and changes everything. Long description Sapura is a lawyer who is in love with an actor named Eddie. Although Eddie has innumerably repeatedly upset her, she has always put him in the on a pedestal.

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  • Long description A lawyer’s blin d ed love to for her actor boyfriend turns her life int o a parade of tears until a man walks into her life and changes everything.
  • Long description Sapura is a lawyer who is in love with an actor named Eddie.
  • Although Eddie has innumerably repeatedly upset her, she has always put him in the on a pedestal.
  • Seeing how much she is subconsciously hurt, her grandmother – who raise d her, collaborates with Sapura's siblings to involve a much-deserving man in the successful lawyer’s life.
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Long description
A lawyer’s blind ed love to for her actor boyfriend turns her life into a parade of tears until a man walks into her life and changes everything.

Long description
Sapura is a lawyer who is in love with an actor named Eddie. Although Eddie has innumerably repeatedly upset her, she has always put him
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