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My pleasure to extend this application for obtain PhD scholarship in you institute ++++
I’m D….. S….. from ……, I have master’s Degree in Commercial science, “insurance & Banc” option (2011), before I got bachelor’s degree in the same field at 2009 at “IBN-Khaldun” university.
I also obtained a three baccalaureate at: 2006, 2007, 2008.
The reason for this presentation to get this scholarship is my wish pursue Doctoral studies, Because I didn’t have this opportunity in my country for reasons beyond my control, & the financial circumstances don’t allow me to pursue this research out my country when I receive to this wonderful & rare opportunity for study “the Economic science” in European country Like Italy when permit to me to agree between the theoretical & practical study.
The Doctoral idea research who I would like to study revolves around :”The international standards for evaluate the performance of insurance companies”, there is my research of the master but the research period not exceeding 6 months, The search didn’t fulfills his right of study, whether in the theoretical or practical terms.
This study will allow examining the criteria for the assessment of financial performance in assurance companies, the reason of collapse of the global financial system when it will be also the solution to the problem because the search seeks to find the defect in the assessment who brought the insurance companies to the global series of collapses & your institute is wonderful opportunity for launch this experiment to light.
Where I adore research, study, exploration & work in the field, I didn’t according very much wich I love, all my ambition is to enter the scientific research in the field of my specialty & increase the quality mot quantity production because there are big field who allows to me to expand my horizons & my vision for making the world a better place for every one.