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Essay & Composition Writing
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DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY
MY LOVELY TEACHERS
Many teachers come and go in the lives of students.I had two teachers who are impression me.They were Miss Chan and Mrs. Raja who taught me in English and Science subjects while i was at secondary school.
Miss Chan was a tall woman, about 1.78 metres, slim and very short hair.She had almond-shaped eyes and a small,straight nose while her mouth was wide.She was a strict teacher with no sense of humour. She liked her students to be serious and give full concentrate on their studies.She was a very good teacher and she was successfully made us feel confident and comfortable in speaking and writing the language in her way of lessons that involved our participation.I loved her so much.
Mrs. Raja was a short, about 1.58 metres tall, a little plump and she was very attractive with her colourful dresses.She wore all kinds of clothes. The colours of her clothes often bright and cheery like herself.She also had a big almond-shaped eyes with the long curly eyelashes, a sharp nose and a rosebud mouth.She was famous with her smiles and very friendly to her students.She also had excellent sense of humour and we were very happy during her classes.
Even though it has been three years since i left school, i still remember these two teachers because they have made a big impression on me.
MY LOVELY TEACHERS
Many teachers come and go in the lives of students.I had two teachers who are impression me.They were Miss Chan and Mrs. Raja who taught me in English and Science subjects while i was at secondary school.
Miss Chan was a tall woman, about 1.78 metres, slim and very short hair.She had almond-shaped eyes and a small,straight nose while her mouth was wide.She was a strict teacher with no sense of humour. She liked her students to be serious and give full concentrate on their studies.She was a very good teacher and she was successfully made us feel confident and comfortable in speaking and writing the language in her way of lessons that involved our participation.I loved her so much.
Mrs. Raja was a short, about 1.58 metres tall, a little plump and she was very attractive with her colourful dresses.She wore all kinds of clothes. The colours of her clothes often bright and cheery like herself.She also had a big almond-shaped eyes with the long curly eyelashes, a sharp nose and a rosebud mouth.She was famous with her smiles and very friendly to her students.She also had excellent sense of humour and we were very happy during her classes.
Even though it has been three years since i left school, i still remember these two teachers because they have made a big impression on me.
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I had two teachers who are impression me. Change this sentence to "teachers who made an impression on me" slim, and very short hair. Change this to slim with very short hair.
- I had two teachers who are impression me.
- Change this sentence to "teachers who made an impression on me" slim, and very short hair.
- Change this to slim with very short hair.
- The colours of her clothers often...
- instead, say, the colours of her clothes were often....
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I had two teachers who are impression me. Change this sentence to "teachers who made an impression on me"
slim, and very short hair. Change this to slim with very short hair.
The colours of her clothers often... instead, say, the colours of her clothes were often....
long curly eyelashes. make sure to have a comma after long.. Long, curly
Make sure to capitalize
slim, and very short hair. Change this to slim with very short hair.
The colours of her clothers often... instead, say, the colours of her clothes were often....
long curly eyelashes. make sure to have a comma after long.. Long, curly
Make sure to capitalize
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