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Nana555 Posted 16 years ago
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Plese correct my mssg
I hope someone could correct my massege.
Thank you very much in advance
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there are alot of Sudanese people who origenally from Indonesia, India, Pakista and Afghanistan. The people here started to be more openminded regarding a woman rights to have a job. In the past, women were just allowed to work as a teacher. And these years that thought has changed and a lot of companies and hospitals started to hire the woman. The scholarship that I belong to called Khartoom program for full scholarship. It targets the students ( man and woman ) that does not mind to go abroad and have the degree earned. The government seeks to have a high educated people to improve the life quality in Sudan. Althought, in past few years it just allow the man to have a scholarship and go abroad. I thank God for giving me this apportunity, I will do my best to be a good student.
I usually visit my relatives every year, but since I moved to Egypt in 2000 I have not visited them again. I really miss them and I hope I could visit them soon.
Thank you very much in advance
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there are alot of Sudanese people who origenally from Indonesia, India, Pakista and Afghanistan. The people here started to be more openminded regarding a woman rights to have a job. In the past, women were just allowed to work as a teacher. And these years that thought has changed and a lot of companies and hospitals started to hire the woman. The scholarship that I belong to called Khartoom program for full scholarship. It targets the students ( man and woman ) that does not mind to go abroad and have the degree earned. The government seeks to have a high educated people to improve the life quality in Sudan. Althought, in past few years it just allow the man to have a scholarship and go abroad. I thank God for giving me this apportunity, I will do my best to be a good student.
I usually visit my relatives every year, but since I moved to Egypt in 2000 I have not visited them again. I really miss them and I hope I could visit them soon.
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there are a lot of ...... few years ago, it was allowed only to men to study and go abroad . i hope i can visit them soon.
- there are a lot of ......
- few years ago, it was allowed only to men to study and go abroad .
- i hope i can visit them soon.
- good luck at your studies
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there are a lot of ...... are originally .....afghanistan.people here .....regarding to the woman right to have a job.......as teachers.nowadays, things are changed and a lot of......to improve people's lives in Sudan.few years ago, it was allowed only to men to study and go abroad .
...i hope i can visit them soon.
i hope i could help you my dear.good luck at your studies
...i hope i can visit them soon.
i hope i could help you my dear.good luck at your studies
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