Plese check my grammatical mistakes in this section of my STATEMENT OF PURPOSE

During my study years in university I tried to face the practical situations, me and some of my friends constituted a small business by assembling and setting up personal computers and local networks. We worked as a team, at that time I realized the efficacy of team-work and I tried to be a gregarious and easily adaptable person as a key to prosperous life. I believed a curious student should stimulate his or her own brain to preventing it from becoming stiff and narrow mind, in order to earn applied skills in real electronic and communication systems I attended in an internship project in Academic Center for Education, Culture and Research K.N.T University Branch one of the biggest research institute of electronic and telecommunication fields in Kuwait.

After graduation I worked in some places as stated in my enclosed C.V but I never could accustom myself to routine, boring and without excitement and creativity atmosphere of these places so I joined to Kuwait Drilling Company K.D.C). My father's origin comes from Kuwaiti's oil and energy capital namely Alahmadi and my grandfather worked in oil installations this family background stimulated me to join the Kuwaiti's main oil drilling company. For two years I was in K.D.C as a mud logger and data engineer in surface logging unit I gained valuable experience in both onshore and offshore drilling rigs especially in Aldourah offshore gas field which is largest Kuwaiti's gas field located in Persian Gulf. During that period I improve my knowledge about various fields of drilling Engineering such as Geosciences, Drilling fluids, Directional Drilling by self study and work experience.

When I was in K.D.C I confronted with some management weaknesses especially about human assets these issues led me to feel there is no scope for progression within that company thus I resigned from company.

In developing countries such as Iran, there are many weaknesses in management, I applying for admission to M.S X in university of X because I would like to continue my career at managerial level in the upstream or downstream petroleum industries, especially in asset or estimates of risk management fields since I have experience and interest in petroleum industry and university of X is one of the best universities of Europe in the fields of petroleum that is situated on the capital of the British oil sector. I think I am appropriate for this program because my engineering degree has given a strong foundation to my analytical skills since electrical engineering involves a lot of long, complex and intricate calculations and the application of advance math skills. I am interested in factors that affect the competitive performance of international oil companies with respect to environment, the health and safety of their personnel.

As a part of my duty, I think, search and select this university as a suitable place for my continuing study. And I hope you help me to guide through that best position by considering my abilities and determining if I can do my best output there or not. I wish, by studying and working hard, I could enhance my knowledge of the world, not only for providing the daily demands of people but also as a pace in eventual felicity of mankind.