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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

please..i want to know wheher this is correct or not?

"I like to request it will be very beneficial if instead of me you allow my friend to collect my stipend on my behalf."

i have to mail to the hr dept..plz tell me this content is correct or not?
  

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Hi, Not good. I suggest eg I would like to arrange for my friend to collect my pay on my behalf. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, Not good.
  • I suggest eg I would like to arrange for my friend to collect my pay on my behalf.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Not good.
I suggest
eg I would like to arrange for my friend to collect my pay on my behalf.

Clive
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