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Baljeetsingh.gill Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
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00 i am writting motivation letter to get admmision in university, they have asked certain question and i have to write according to them, questions are: 02 br
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00 Please state your post-MBA short and long-term goals. 02 br
00 How will the *** MBA assist you to obtain these goals 02 br
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00 I am writing to apply for the Master’s program degree MBA in International Industrial Management at the *** University, as an international student from India, for the entry of September 2007. 02 br
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00 “Far and away the best prize that life offers is the chance to work hard at work worth doing”, said Theodore Roosevelt. I came to know that if I had clear goals and worked hard, I could clarify my own vision and direct the path of my life. There are many projects I have for myself in the future, and going to *** University is one of them. 02 br
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00 After completing the International Industrial Management Degree, I want to work in an international firm focusing on management consulting. I feel that the MBA in International Industrial Management would give me not only important knowledge in management and valuable experience, but also competitive advantage in this area. I think that an international experience is a must in the field of management and foreign internship is a good challenge and practice for a student. 02 br
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00 There are many reasons for my desire to pursue an international Industrial management as major. Just the word “international” appeals to me greatly; I think of traveling, learning new languages, and working with foreign people. Business is something I have wanted to do for a very long time; therefore, it was clear to me that international industrial management is the perfect major. I am confident that *** is the best school for shaping my future the way I imagine because Study in one of the most industrial regions in Europe can help me to get valuable international work experience. University has a close relationship to companies which will help me to hone my management skills which I will learn from highly experienced university professors. I will get the opportunity to study *** and to explore *** mentality and culture by participating in excursions, cultural lectures and social events 0-
00 i am writting motivation letter to get admmision in university, they have asked certain question and i have to write according to them, questions are: 02 br
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00 Please state your post-MBA short and long-term goals. 02 br
00 How will the *** MBA assist you to obtain these goals 02 br
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00 I am writing to apply for the Master’s program degree MBA in International Industrial Management at the *** University, as an international student from India, for the entry of September 2007. 02 br
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00 “Far and away the best prize that life offers is the chance to work hard at work worth doing”, said Theodore Roosevelt. I came to know that if I had clear goals and worked hard, I could clarify my own vision and direct the path of my life. There are many projects I have for myself in the future, and going to *** University is one of them. 02 br
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00 After completing the International Industrial Management Degree, I want to work in an international firm focusing on management consulting. I feel that the MBA in International Industrial Management would give me not only important knowledge in management and valuable experience, but also competitive advantage in this area. I think that an international experience is a must in the field of management and foreign internship is a good challenge and practice for a student. 02 br
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00 There are many reasons for my desire to pursue an international Industrial management as major. Just the word “international” appeals to me greatly; I think of traveling, learning new languages, and working with foreign people. Business is something I have wanted to do for a very long time; therefore, it was clear to me that international industrial management is the perfect major. I am confident that *** is the best school for shaping my future the way I imagine because Study in one of the most industrial regions in Europe can help me to get valuable international work experience. University has a close relationship to companies which will help me to hone my management skills which I will learn from highly experienced university professors. I will get the opportunity to study *** and to explore *** mentality and culture by participating in excursions, cultural lectures and social events 0-
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it sounds stronger if you write "i'm confident" or i'm positive" 0-
- it sounds stronger if you write "i'm confident" or i'm positive" 0-
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0 leave off phrases like "i feel" or "i believe"....it sounds stronger if you write "i'm confident" or i'm positive" 0-
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0 I've picked up a few little errors for you. I would re-write the parts that talk of 'majoring' in international management. This is not really appropriate for this context. Perhaps you could use 'specialising' instead. 02 br
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00 I am writing to apply for the Master’s program degree MBA in International Industrial Management at the *** University, as an international student
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00 I am writing to apply for the Master’s program degree MBA in International Industrial Management at the *** University, as an international student
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0 Thank you ma'm ......i'm very much thankful to you that u have checked my motivation letter .......now can i freeze this letter or it need more correction......and one more thing please suggest me is this letter contain proper answer which i have mentioned above 02 br
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