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UMUTEJDER Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
PLEASE,COULD YOU CORRECT THE MISTAKES IN WRİTİNG? THANK YOU.
There are a few mistakes in the writing.Could you help please ?
MY HOBBIES.
Hello,I am going to make my first comment in this website
with your permission : )
I have hobbies in different fields.
For example,I am interested in angling.
Forbearing and know a several methods are definitely necessary.
In addition,it is a hilarious kind of hobby extremely.I would
recommend you.
Secondly, in case of music ;
I am listening turkish classic and rap music.
Moreover,I would like give a short info related Hip hop,
Hip hop is a culture and life style.The life style consists of four elements.
-Rap music,break dans,graffiti art ,Djing.
Out of my two hobbies,I am interested in graphic design also.But I am not
good and I am at beginning level.But I am willing and I have plenty of
motivation to improve it.
You need to be creativity and inspiration to be good in this field.I can say that
this hobby is also hilarious extremely like angling.
: ) Thank you for your interest.
MY HOBBIES.
Hello,I am going to make my first comment in this website
with your permission : )
I have hobbies in different fields.
For example,I am interested in angling.
Forbearing and know a several methods are definitely necessary.
In addition,it is a hilarious kind of hobby extremely.I would
recommend you.
Secondly, in case of music ;
I am listening turkish classic and rap music.
Moreover,I would like give a short info related Hip hop,
Hip hop is a culture and life style.The life style consists of four elements.
-Rap music,break dans,graffiti art ,Djing.
Out of my two hobbies,I am interested in graphic design also.But I am not
good and I am at beginning level.But I am willing and I have plenty of
motivation to improve it.
You need to be creativity and inspiration to be good in this field.I can say that
this hobby is also hilarious extremely like angling.
: ) Thank you for your interest.
Top answer
There are some sentences that I do not understand. Here are some suggestions: For example,I am interested in angling. ) Forbearing and know a several methods are definitely necessary.
- There are some sentences that I do not understand.
- Here are some suggestions: For example,I am interested in angling.
- ) Forbearing and know a several methods are definitely necessary.
- ) Maybe you wanted to say this: To be a successful angler, you need to be patient and learn good techniques.
- I would recommend you.
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There are some sentences that I do not understand. Here are some suggestions:
For example,I am interested in angling. OK (This is a type of fishing.)
Forbearing and know a several methods are definitely necessary. (?) Maybe you wanted to say this: To be a successful angler, you need to be patient and learn good technique
For example,I am interested in angling. OK (This is a type of fishing.)
Forbearing and know a several methods are definitely necessary. (?) Maybe you wanted to say this: To be a successful angler, you need to be patient and learn good technique
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