Could you please help me correct the grammar in these sentences please?<br/><br/><i><b>- The police will be quick to connect the dots. We need to hurry up.</b></i><br/><br/><i><b>- I worked 3 months in one month.</b></i><br/><br/><i><b>- Would I look good short hair?</b></i><br/><br/><i><b>- You deserve to starve. I asked you if you wanted to eat earlier and you said no.</b></i><br/><br/><i><b>- He felt sick but not half as bad as you felt.</b></i><br/><br/><i><b>- Are you warm that jack?</b></i><br/><br/><i><b>- I have 10 minutes on her./She's ten minutes behind me.</b></i><br/><br/><i><b>- I put something to heavy in my bag and the strap broke.</b></i><br/><br/>Thank you<br/>