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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Please will a native help me with the grammar?
Could you please help me correct these and make them natural?
1 The further into the night we go, the fuzzier everything seems. I remember everything up until 10pm and after that it gets fuzzy. (telling a friend about last night)
2 In every hotel I've worked at, we've had to do that. [ok]
3 My phone's brightness is turned to a minimum./is at a minimum.
4 The tournament is getting closer to the finals, so the prices of the seats are more expensive. (this sound really unnatural, please help make it natural)
5 You have 2 times as much chance of crashing if you take 2 planes as if you take one.
Thank you
1 The further into the night we go, the fuzzier everything seems. I remember everything up until 10pm and after that it gets fuzzy. (telling a friend about last night)
2 In every hotel I've worked at, we've had to do that. [ok]
3 My phone's brightness is turned to a minimum./is at a minimum.
4 The tournament is getting closer to the finals, so the prices of the seats are more expensive. (this sound really unnatural, please help make it natural)
5 You have 2 times as much chance of crashing if you take 2 planes as if you take one.
Thank you
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5 You have twice the chance The others are fine.
- 5 You have twice the chance The others are fine.
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Thank you Philip,
Could you please let me know what you think?
For 1,
Someone told me that it should be
The further through the night we go....
He siad it wasn't naturally like that either but it was better.
What do you think Philip?
Thank you
Could you please let me know what you think?
For 1,
Someone told me that it should be
The further through the night we go....
He siad it wasn't naturally like that either but it was better.
What do you think Philip?
Thank you
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