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Lê Thiên Hoàng Posted 11 years ago
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Please who check for errors in this writing?

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Damian, who was a rich man, and had cancer. As soon as dead, he was looking for a research institute, where he may to put his consciousness in the young man. Luckily, he have a chance to live again with a young man and his brain.
  

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Damian who was a rich man and he had cancer. As soon as dead Soon after he died, , he started was looking for a research institute, (no comma) where he could may to put his consciousness in to a the young man 's brain . Luckily, he had a chance to live again in the body of with a young man and his brain.

  • Damian who was a rich man and he had cancer.
  • As soon as dead Soon after he died, , he started was looking for a research institute, (no comma) where he could may to put his consciousness in to a the young man 's brain .
  • Luckily, he had a chance to live again in the body of with a young man and his brain.
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Damian who was a rich man and he had cancer. As soon as dead Soon after he died,, he started was looking for a research institute, (no comma) where he could may to put his consciousness into a the young man's brain. Luckily, he had a chance to live again in the body of with

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