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Lê Thiên Hoàng Posted 11 years ago
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I love Information Technology when I was child with passion, yearning become a professional developer. So I decided it for working in future although my family wants to me do a cop, a job in the state but I didn't change the dream for that. It is a part of mine life. So I hope be do a job in a position of developer for game, application, work in an active environment with precious opportunities for career advancement.

I did not write so good(That's not good literature).
  

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I have loved Information Technology since I was child, yearning to become a professional developer, even though my family wants me to join the police force. I hope to become a game or application developer and work in an active environment with opportunities for career advancement.

  • I have loved Information Technology since I was child, yearning to become a professional developer, even though my family wants me to join the police force.
  • I hope to become a game or application developer and work in an active environment with opportunities for career advancement.
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I have loved Information Technology since I was child, yearning to become a professional developer, even though my family wants me to join the police force. I hope to become a game or application developer and work in an active environment with opportunities for career advancement.

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