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Andyw12345 Posted 18 years ago
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Please verify the below...

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00Since the longevity of a fesitval is heavily influenced by the level of local support...02br
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0Andy02br 00 Why do you think it doesn't make sense? 02br 00btw fesitval should be spelled 'festival' 0-

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0Andy02br
00 Why do you think it doesn't make sense? 02br
00btw fesitval should be spelled 'festival' 0-
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0I would use "Because" instead of "Since," and I think you mean the length of the festival (3 days or 2 days), not its longevity (this is the 85th year it's been put on).0-
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0Hi guys,02br
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00Thanks for your responses.02br
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00What I am trying to say is that local support is vital if the festival is to carry on going in the future. In this case, is what I have written OK (if I swap since for because)?02br
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00Many thanks :-)0-
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0I think you'll still find people confused about whether you mean how many days it will last or how long into the future (years) it will continue. 02br
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00Can you say simply "the future success" instead of "the longevity"0-
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0That sounds like a good idea, thanks Grammar Geek :-).0-
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