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Dewimarina Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Please urgent, to check my grammar for my Cover Letter
I am not good writing in English, but I need to send informal cover letter. Can someone help me with the grammar or maybe vocabulary, that can make this letter easy to understand yet sophisticated 
. Thank you in advance
Hi xxx,
I would like to give more detail to my resume that I sent to you earlier.
I have been moving around since I got married in 1998. I managed to get my MBA during my first pregnancy and became stay at home mom since then. I have two kids at age 10 and 7 now.
During those years, I have remain active to a lot of organizations in the city that I lived in.
Now, my husband who works for xxxx, is working permanently in Singapore. The things that crossed my mind are Singapore is a country that has tons of opportunities, I can work 8 to 5 (no traffic jam) and good time to go back to work, since the kids are independent.
Looking at the resume, I might not an obvious fit to your company but I am very good at organizing things, quick learner, efficient and easy to socialize. I can do the work and make valuable things in your Singapore office.
That so much I can tell you about me right now and looking forward to meet you.
my name
. Thank you in advanceHi xxx,
I would like to give more detail to my resume that I sent to you earlier.
I have been moving around since I got married in 1998. I managed to get my MBA during my first pregnancy and became stay at home mom since then. I have two kids at age 10 and 7 now.
During those years, I have remain active to a lot of organizations in the city that I lived in.
Now, my husband who works for xxxx, is working permanently in Singapore. The things that crossed my mind are Singapore is a country that has tons of opportunities, I can work 8 to 5 (no traffic jam) and good time to go back to work, since the kids are independent.
Looking at the resume, I might not an obvious fit to your company but I am very good at organizing things, quick learner, efficient and easy to socialize. I can do the work and make valuable things in your Singapore office.
That so much I can tell you about me right now and looking forward to meet you.
my name
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Hi X I would like to give more detail to the resume I sent you earlier. I've been moving around since 1998 when I got married. I could manage to get my MBA when I'm pregnant and have stayed at home with my mother since then.
- Hi X I would like to give more detail to the resume I sent you earlier.
- I've been moving around since 1998 when I got married.
- I could manage to get my MBA when I'm pregnant and have stayed at home with my mother since then.
- Now I have two children at the age of 10 and 7.
- I'm very active in many organizations in the city I live in.
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Hi X
I would like to give more detail to the resume I sent you earlier.
I've been moving around since 1998 when I got married. I could manage to get my MBA when I'm pregnant and have stayed at home with my mother since then. Now I have two children at the age of 10 and 7.
I'm very active in many organizations in the city I live in.
Now, my husband is working in Sing
I would like to give more detail to the resume I sent you earlier.
I've been moving around since 1998 when I got married. I could manage to get my MBA when I'm pregnant and have stayed at home with my mother since then. Now I have two children at the age of 10 and 7.
I'm very active in many organizations in the city I live in.
Now, my husband is working in Sing
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Hi ***,
I would like to give more detail to my resume that I sent to you earlier.
I have been moving around since I got married in 1998. I managed to get my MBA during my first pregnancy and stayed with my mother since then. I have two children who are now 10 and 7 years old. While taking care of my children, I remained active in many organizations.
Now, my husband is w
I would like to give more detail to my resume that I sent to you earlier.
I have been moving around since I got married in 1998. I managed to get my MBA during my first pregnancy and stayed with my mother since then. I have two children who are now 10 and 7 years old. While taking care of my children, I remained active in many organizations.
Now, my husband is w
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I would like to give you more detail to.......
became a stay at home.....
I have remained active with a lot of organizations...
I might not be an obvious fit....
I can do the work and can do valuable things.....
Instead of the last sentence say:
I look forward to meeting you so that I can tell you more about me and how I can h
became a stay at home.....
I have remained active with a lot of organizations...
I might not be an obvious fit....
I can do the work and can do valuable things.....
Instead of the last sentence say:
I look forward to meeting you so that I can tell you more about me and how I can h
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