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Anarainbow Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Please - Urgent - Correction of a short sentence

Please, could you correct this sentence? The word that begins with M and it is follow by **** is a name of a company.

I'm adressing you because I am really interested in this opportunity on M************* and, as required, my application goes as an attach to this e-mail.

Thank you very much!!
  

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I'm contacting adressing you because I am really interested in this opportunity with on M************* and, as required, my application is attached goes as an attach to this e-mail. You could write: as required, I have attached my application for your consideration.

  • I'm contacting adressing you because I am really interested in this opportunity with on M************* and, as required, my application is attached goes as an attach to this e-mail.
  • You could write: as required, I have attached my application for your consideration.
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I'm contacting adressing you because I am really interested in this opportunity with on M************* and, as required, my application is attached goes as an attach to this e-mail.

You could write:

as required, I have attached my application for your consideration.
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]I'm contacting adressing you because I am really interested in this opportunity with on M************* and, as required, my application is attached goes as an attach to this e-mail.

I have some doubts if it is correct to write in a formal English ...with M******* ( name of the company)

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