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Rona2010 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please ur correction..

since the development of technology has increased rapidly,Innovation is getting more important and faster. It influences directly to product development. Once a new product has been created, it will shortly be replaced by a newer product in terms of months or even weeks.

is it correct? TQ in advance..
  

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Hi Rona, Welcome to the forum. I'm not exactly sure what you are trying to say, but I'll give you my interpretation and you can tell me if it's right. Since the rapid development of technology, innovation has become even more important as how fast it occurs directly influences product development.

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  • Hi Rona, Welcome to the forum.
  • I'm not exactly sure what you are trying to say, but I'll give you my interpretation and you can tell me if it's right.
  • Since the rapid development of technology, innovation has become even more important as how fast it occurs directly influences product development.
  • Once a new product has been created, it may be replaced by a newer product within the space of months or even weeks.
  • faster may instead of will [not all products are replaced that quickly] within the space of = in tems of Hope this helps.
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Hi Rona,
Welcome to the forum. I'm not exactly sure what you are trying to say, but I'll give you my interpretation and you can tell me if it's right.

Since the rapid development of technology, innovation has become even more important as how fast it occurs directly influences product development. Once a new product has been created, it may be replaced by a newer
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Yes, That's really helpful..

Will ask again once i need another correction.Emotion: smile

Best Regard,

RoNa2010
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