Please to help me revise this essay about throw-away society

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We are now living in a throw-away society,what are the causes and what problems it may cause?

I thinke it is undeniable that in almost every country was filled by vast quanlities of disposable goods,such as razor,tableware,packaging from things and so forth,and the culprit of this situation would probably be the modern lifestyles.

With the pace of life is accelerating,the main reason would be that we all be addicted to the benefits the disposable lifestyles brought to us.For instance,in order to make our everyday lifes more productive,we often eat out or call some take out food from a fast food shop ,instead of cooking and washing dishes for ourselves.so we can put more time into our career and make more contribution to the community.Meanwhile,in some deluxe restaurants,the one-time tablewares may established a splendid impression with high standard hygiene so that it could attracting more customers and making a great fortune.

Although,we all gained a lot of benefits from the throw-away world.Yet,the irreparable impact of this living habits are made to us is escalating.The first and foremost,the great demands of disposable wooden products led to the deteriorated situations of the rampant over deforestation.At the same time,the knock-on effects of the worldwide diminution of the forrest resula in a worse circumstance of global warming.On the other hand, as a result of that lifestyle people generally turned into sluggish and sluttish.becouse people do not clean or repair something which will be threw away after one time use.

Finally,we should not nelgect the changes that we made to the world when we enjoying a comfortable and convenient life,the disposable world has its positive side and we should be aware of.

Thanks for your time,i really appreciate it.

Jasoneo · Accepted Answer

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Gaetano · Answer

Hi jasoneo, I just tried to review it. Please don't take it too seriously! You'd better wait for someone else's check

We can’t deny that almost every country is full of vast quantities of disposable goods such as razors, tableware, packaging. I think this situation is the result of modern lifestyle.

With the pace of life is accelerating,the main reason would be that we all be addicted to the benefits the disposable lifestyles brought to us. (I don’t understand what you mean).

For instance, in order to be more productive in our everyday life, we often eat out or take away food from a fast food restaurant, instead of cooking and washing dishes by ourselves. Thus we can better focus on our working career and contribute more to the development of our community.

On the other hand, in some deluxe restaurants, one-time tableware may establish high standards of hygiene and make a stunning impression on the guests. This way could boost restaurant’s revenues by attracting more customers.

Even if everyone is benefiting from a throw-away world, these habits are making an irreparable impact on the environment. For example the rising demand for wooden products is leading to a rampant deforestation. This situation has had a knock-on effect on the global warming, affecting countries worldwide.

As a result of that lifestyle people generally have become sluggish and sluttish because they prefer not to clean or repair what they can throw away after one time of use.

Finally, we should not neglect how we are modifying the world to enjoy a more comfortable and convenient life, but we should remember that the disposable world has its positive side and we should be aware of it.

Jasoneo · Answer

hi,Gaetano

Thank you for this..

I think i should insert one more sentence in there:

With the pace of life is accelerating, the main reason of the formation of the throw-out city would be that we all be addicted to the benefits the disposable lifestyles brought to us.

Is it better to understand it?

Please to help me revise this essay about throw-away society

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