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Hoang lethien Posted 10 years ago
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Please to fix errors in story.
Sunday,I went to Da Lat city soon on my dad's motorcycle borrowed. An halftime for driving, in font of me was the pine trees line on the pass, I went through over it slowly. So I felt comfortable with the wind and the shadow covers on the pass.
For 10 minutes later, I saw that there is a road in font of the left side by me. It is a small new street was built some months ago. Then I took on the left and continue to go straight ahead for about half mile. A big lake show off in my eyes, It names is Tuyen Lam lake. Besides, There were many travelers who are viewing and discovering there. I was looking for where to able to parking. I stopped and left on my motorcycle. Starting to discovered around the lake."a thing never forget" that it is a martphone. I saved those pictures by it.
For 11:30, I left there and continue trip to the church after I got information from helping center. But the church was very difficulties to find out. So I have asked a few people around road for helping to directions. So I found out it. The church name was Linh Phuoc. There also were travelers who are foreign were viewing. The church was beautiful but it looks like scary and secret. I will never be there in night that was real.
For 12:45, I was hungry and I looked for restaurants on the road. So I thought a place where I ate there for a long time ago. I decided to go to there. While I was ordering to meals, I got a old co-worker. We talked about a story of old company when I leaved. After I done eating. I did not know next place where I will go, so I asked her about it. She talked about a biggest place, is one of five churches of the biggest in Viet Nam. It make me curiously, I said " Bye" to her.
After I went to there right now, It was beautiful and big place as she asked. There are many trees around here. Te atmosphere always quite. Which was very different between cities and the church. I have spend much time to discover round here. I though that I should return my house soon because I borrored this motorcycle.
Please to fix errors about grammars, sentences...thanks
For 10 minutes later, I saw that there is a road in font of the left side by me. It is a small new street was built some months ago. Then I took on the left and continue to go straight ahead for about half mile. A big lake show off in my eyes, It names is Tuyen Lam lake. Besides, There were many travelers who are viewing and discovering there. I was looking for where to able to parking. I stopped and left on my motorcycle. Starting to discovered around the lake."a thing never forget" that it is a martphone. I saved those pictures by it.
For 11:30, I left there and continue trip to the church after I got information from helping center. But the church was very difficulties to find out. So I have asked a few people around road for helping to directions. So I found out it. The church name was Linh Phuoc. There also were travelers who are foreign were viewing. The church was beautiful but it looks like scary and secret. I will never be there in night that was real.
For 12:45, I was hungry and I looked for restaurants on the road. So I thought a place where I ate there for a long time ago. I decided to go to there. While I was ordering to meals, I got a old co-worker. We talked about a story of old company when I leaved. After I done eating. I did not know next place where I will go, so I asked her about it. She talked about a biggest place, is one of five churches of the biggest in Viet Nam. It make me curiously, I said " Bye" to her.
After I went to there right now, It was beautiful and big place as she asked. There are many trees around here. Te atmosphere always quite. Which was very different between cities and the church. I have spend much time to discover round here. I though that I should return my house soon because I borrored this motorcycle.
Please to fix errors about grammars, sentences...thanks
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You are not ready to write compositions. I advise you to write individual sentences to get some basic writing practice first.
- You are not ready to write compositions.
- I advise you to write individual sentences to get some basic writing practice first.
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You are not ready to write compositions. I advise you to write individual sentences to get some basic writing practice first.
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