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Beckraj23 Posted 15 years ago
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As I’m a trekking & mountain guide and a tourism entrepreneur of Nepal I have a responsibility of society. This is why I’m engaged with Finale for Nepal, The Organization that based in Savona city, Finale Ligure, Italy. Aim of Finale for Nepal is to create better future in education of Nepal people. So we help a Chepang village in Shaktikhor Chitwan and myself I arranged sponsorship for few children from different part of Nepal.
Secondly, this event brings thousands of Italian people in the event so this is the right platform to me to introduce my company to the Italian market..

Since I’m invited by Agostino Mamberto & family to participate in the event Finale For nepal, I found this is the golden time to promote my tourism business as well as help my society.

Thank you very much and looking forward your kind response. Should you have any questions please contact me at <telephone number removed> or <email address removed>
  

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As a trekking and mountain guide and a tourism entrepreneur of Nepal I have to be responsible to society. This is why I’m engaged with Finale for Nepal, the organization based in Finale Ligure, Savona City, Italy. The aim of Finale for Nepal is to create better future for education of Nepalese people.

  • As a trekking and mountain guide and a tourism entrepreneur of Nepal I have to be responsible to society.
  • This is why I’m engaged with Finale for Nepal, the organization based in Finale Ligure, Savona City, Italy.
  • The aim of Finale for Nepal is to create better future for education of Nepalese people.
  • So, first, we help a Chepang village in Shaktikhor Chitwan where I, myself, arranged scholarship for a few children from different part of Nepal.
  • Second, this event brings thousands of Italian people to the event thus giving me an opportunity to introduce my company to the Italian market.
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As a trekking and mountain guide and a tourism entrepreneur of Nepal I have to be responsible to society. This is why I’m engaged with Finale for Nepal, the organization based in Finale Ligure, Savona City, Italy. The aim of Finale for Nepal is to create better future for education of Nepalese people. So, first, we help a Chepang village in Shaktikhor Chitwan where I, myself, arranged scholarship

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