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The bar charts present the total medal achieved by the best five nations during the summer and the winter Olympics.
Overall, the United States, Russia, and Germany stayed within the top 5 countries in both events while Norway and Canada were replaced by Great Britain and France in terms of medals won.
In the winter Olympics, the U.S has the second-highest number of medals obtained with over 300 medals. The country ranking was increased to first place with over 2500 medals in the Summer Olympics. Germany is ranked third place in both events, with nearly 250 medals in the winter and around 1700 medals in the summer Olympics. Although Russia is placed fourth in the winter Olympics, the country surpass Germany with around 100 medals more in the summer one, second to only the United States.
While Norway has the highest number of accumulated medals with over 350 of them in the winter Olympics, it is out of the top five in the summer event. Similarly, Canada, with just under 200 medals in winter, is also surpassed by another country in summer. These 2 nations that replaced them are Great Britain and France, with each total being at under 800 and under 700 medals, respectively.
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You have many poor word choices and unnatural phrases. You never mentioned a major feature of the first bar chart, the distinctions between gold, silver and bronze. You focused too much on small details.
- You have many poor word choices and unnatural phrases.
- You never mentioned a major feature of the first bar chart, the distinctions between gold, silver and bronze.
- You focused too much on small details.
- The bar charts present the total medal achieved by the best five nations (very bad English) during the summer and the winter Olympics.
- Overall, the United States, Russia, and Germany stayed (not a good word choice) within the top 5 countries (unnatural) in both events (poor word choice.
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You have many poor word choices and unnatural phrases. You never mentioned a major feature of the first bar chart, the distinctions between gold, silver and bronze. You focused too much on small details.
The bar charts present the total medal achieved by the best five nations (very bad English) during the summer and the winter Ol
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