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Roselily Posted 22 years ago
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Please tell me is this sentence right ? Thanks!

Please tell me is this sentence right ?

"The tool was designed by the monthly changes of your baby's growth and development to help you understand more about this process and will guide you during this time."

Many thanks!
  

Top answer

NO! The baby's monthly growth did not design the tool. Construction is most awkward!

  • NO!
  • The baby's monthly growth did not design the tool.
  • Construction is most awkward!
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NO! The baby's monthly growth did not design the tool. Construction is most awkward!
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Thank you, jfleis. I modified it on the following:

"The tool was designed by baby's month age to help you understand more about baby's development and will guide you during this time."

Is it proper? Thanks!
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Hello roselily,

I'm afraid it doesn't look much better.

Did you mean to say, "The tool was designed in accordance with the monthly changes of your baby's growth and development to help you understand more about this process, and to guide you during this time?"

Mirapence
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Hi Mirapence,

You are right. I'm going to take your advice.
Thank you, very much!

roselily
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Thanks for listening to me

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