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I tried to translation a business latter from Chinese to English,please help me check whether they are conrrect or not,thank you

1.It is about the follow-up matters of the cantract with xx Co.,Ltd.

2.In consideration of the contract will expire on December 31,2016,please provide content of the new contract and statements of work for our company to deliberate and make subsequent contract.

3.Please provide subsequent service contract

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I tried to translate a business letter from Chinese to English. Please help me check whether these sentences are correct or not. Thank you.

1. It is about the follow-up [Do you mean 'following'?] matters of the contract with xx Co.,Ltd.

2. In consideration of the fact that the contract will expire on December 31, 2016, please [do not forget the spaces after the commas] provide content of the new contract and statements of work for our company to deliberate and make subsequent contract.

3. Please provide subsequent service contract.

In general, I think that, if this is to be a letter, it is quite short. You should write the title of the subject, an introduction, a conclusion, and just do everything a bit more neatly and more organised.

please tell me if the traslation is incorrect

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