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Topic : Some people prefer to live in a small town . Others prefer to live in a big city . Which place would you prefer to live in ? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

I grew up in a big city with my family when i was a child . So i don’t think that someday i’m going to move in to live in a small town . personally , i like to live in a big city than a small town because we can have the opportunities to get the better job . The entertainment media is also variety and the atmosphere is also vivid than small town . In addition , i can live nearby my family .

The frist reason , when we live in a central city , we have the chance to get the job that we wish . There are several corporations , they choose to locate their companies in large population areas . also , the paycheck is higher than suburb . Because of that reason , we can take that opprtunity to get the better job to improve our life of living .

Secondly , there are a bunch of ways in city to entertain. If we have worked all day long and we want to release stress , we can go to cinema or concert . The atmosphere in city is also energetic than small town . In the evening , on the main street several people take their time with their friends and their families . Therefore , that create lively a city picture .

Thirdly , because i live in city so my relatives are always nearby me . I may visit them more easily and they also can meet me whenever thay want . In addition , when i encounter a problem , it’s really difficult for me to handle by myself . So i think that my family are willing to give a hand to deal with that problem with me when i’m nearby them .

Living in a small town or living in a big city i think that both also have the interesting and their own benefits . but in my opinion i like to live in big city than small town because of easily to get job , variety of entertainment and live nearby my family.