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Davefromthefreeway Posted 19 years ago
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0 I need to know if it is grammatically correct and feel free to change it to make it sound more appealing. Thanks02br
00>>01span02span01span00Physics being my last period it was heavily influenced by all of my extra curriculum activities, so I retook this course to show my real performance.02span01span00<<02span00 0-
  

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0How about:02br 02br 00As Physics was scheduled for the last period of the day, it was impacted by all my extra-curricular activities. 0-

— Lil' Ruby Rose

  • 0How about:02br 02br 00As Physics was scheduled for the last period of the day, it was impacted by all my extra-curricular activities.
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00As Physics was scheduled for the last period of the day, it was impacted by all my extra-curricular activities. I decided to retake the course to give a more accurate picture of my performance.0-
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0 00Ruby Rose you rock! Thank you very much.05000 010id2
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01cite10Davefromthefreeway12cite10I need to know if it is grammatically correct and feel free to change it to make it sound more appealing. Thanks12br
10>>10Physics, being my last period, was heavily influenced by all my extra curricular activities, so I retook this course to show my true abilities..10<<1
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0 Excellent point Anonymous.0-
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11cite20Davefromthefreeway22cite20I need to know if it is grammatically correct and feel free to change it to make it sound more appealing. Thanks22br
20>>20Physics, being my last period, was heavily influenced by all my extra curricular act
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01cite10Anonymous12cite10>>Physics, being my last period, was heavily influenced by all my 11font10extra curricular12font10 activities, so I retook this course to show my true abilities..<<12blockquote
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