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Lajos Szkajvolker Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Please take a look at my paragraph!
Hi dear Teachers,
I've tried my best to phrase my point, but I'm still not completely satisfied. Could you please share your thoughts about it:
"Anyone who claims that he knows what consciousness is, should be able to recreate it. Every necessary tool for making an artificial mind is avaible for science: we can simulate neural networks in computer programs, we have artifical computing power that exceeds the capabilities of the human brain and we can communicate with these programs in a sophisticated human language. The only thing that stops science from making an artificial consciousness is that nobody knows what it really is. "
Thank you!
I've tried my best to phrase my point, but I'm still not completely satisfied. Could you please share your thoughts about it:
"Anyone who claims that he knows what consciousness is, should be able to recreate it. Every necessary tool for making an artificial mind is avaible for science: we can simulate neural networks in computer programs, we have artifical computing power that exceeds the capabilities of the human brain and we can communicate with these programs in a sophisticated human language. The only thing that stops science from making an artificial consciousness is that nobody knows what it really is. "
Thank you!
Top answer
Do not separate the subject and verb with a comma: Anyone who claims that he knows what consciousness is should be able to recreate it. "Necessary tool" is wrong. They are not necessary tools, they are tools [that are] necessary for something.
- Do not separate the subject and verb with a comma: Anyone who claims that he knows what consciousness is should be able to recreate it.
- "Necessary tool" is wrong.
- They are not necessary tools, they are tools [that are] necessary for something.
- Also, the tools are available [spelling] "to" science: Every tool necessary for making an artificial mind is available to science ....
- The second "artificial" is spelled wrong.
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Do not separate the subject and verb with a comma: Anyone who claims that he knows what consciousness is should be able to recreate it.
"Necessary tool" is wrong. They are not necessary tools, they are tools [that are] necessary for something. Also, the tools are available [spelling] "to" science: Every tool necessary for making an artificial mind is available to science ....
"Necessary tool" is wrong. They are not necessary tools, they are tools [that are] necessary for something. Also, the tools are available [spelling] "to" science: Every tool necessary for making an artificial mind is available to science ....
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