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There has been a rise in a very immoral tendency among the young and attractive sub urban Indian women . Some of these women marry physically unattractive men of reasonable means and within months of marriage threaten them with domestic violence law suites and get a forced divorce and take away half their money in alimony . With that money these women settle down with their man of choice.
  

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There has been a rise in a very immoral tendency practice among the young and attractive suburban Indian women . Some of these women marry physically unattractive men of reasonable means , and within months of marriage , threaten them with domestic - violence law suit e s , and get a forced divorce force them to agree to divorce, and take away half their money in alimony . With that money , these women settle down with their man of choice.

  • There has been a rise in a very immoral tendency practice among the young and attractive suburban Indian women .
  • Some of these women marry physically unattractive men of reasonable means , and within months of marriage , threaten them with domestic - violence law suit e s , and get a forced divorce force them to agree to divorce, and take away half their money in alimony .
  • With that money , these women settle down with their man of choice.
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There has been a rise in a very immoral tendency practice among the young and attractive suburban Indian women . Some of these women marry physically unattractive men of reasonable means, and within months of marriage

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