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Enrich Publication Posted 12 years ago
Business & Finance

Please suggest a better reply.

I had written to a company introducing my organisation to which they wrote:

It was kind of you to share the details about your organization. I will forward this to the textbook and curricular material evaluation team for their evaluation.

We will get back to you if they want to know more.

Have a great day ahead!

Could you please check my reply if it is professional enough and do I need to add more?

Dear Mr. ABC,

Thank you for forwarding our work to the concerned team. We will be looking forward to your response.

Hope to get a chance to work with your prestige organization.

Warm Regards,
XYZ
  

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This is all you need at the moment. Don't fawn: Dear Mr. ABC, Thank you for forwarding our information to the concerned team.

— Mister Micawber

  • This is all you need at the moment.
  • Don't fawn: Dear Mr.
  • ABC, Thank you for forwarding our information to the concerned team.
  • We will be looking forward to your response.
  • Warm regards, XYZ
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This is all you need at the moment. Don't fawn:


Dear Mr. ABC,

Thank you for forwarding our information to the concerned team. We will be looking forward to your response.

Warm regards,

XYZ
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