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Topic: Are famous people treated unfairly by the media. Should they be given more privacy or is the price of their fame on invasion into private life.

Recently the phenomenon has aroused much concern about the way media treats famous people. It is quite clear that celebrities are treated unfairly by media and they should be given more freedom.

There is no doubt about the unfair treatment of media toward famous people. Media nowadays seems to focus on scandals and troubles in life of celebrities. The most familiar example of this is that private life of celebrities is exposed on social media, news and some television channels against their will. It is not hard to read some personal stories and relationships of famous people with headline tending to manipulate public .In addition, some media channels even hire photographer spying, stalking famous people in order to post the latest news about their private life.

There are many reasons why media should give famous people more privacy. Firstly, it is all agreed that being in spotlight does not mean famous people have to give up the private aspects in their life. It is reasonable that media access on professional aspects such as a movie scenery of actor or album of singer, but it is better to stop before crossing the line of invasion personal life. Moreover, media’s invasion also brings many issues to celebrities. Some might be over worried, obsessed and depressed or even worse some famous people think about suicide so that they can being released from social pressure.

In conclusion, it should be borne in mind that famous people deserved to be treated fairly. Media should respect private life of famous people and gradually, give them more privacy.