Please someone help me correct HARD sentences I find...

Could you please help me correct these sentences that I find hard please?

1 I'm not going to ask you to give it to me when you can sell it.
2 We're bound to get/have dissatified customers.
3 He was made to sweat when he won the match after being on the brink of elimination.
4 Instead of (sending me) that, can you send me something else.
5 Broiling is going to take a little longer than on the grill.
6 Just to get you to understand how tired I am. It's as if it was 3 am for you and you were dead tired. That's how I'm feeling right now.
7 You don't want me wearing that as you don't want e to look good compared to you/next to you.
8 When something is shown is slow motion it is shown at half the speed you usually see it at.
9 That's the nicest 40 year old midriff I've ever seen./nicest midriff I've seen on a 40 year old.
10 Her kissing doesn't do half as much as her stare does for me. (gives pleasure)

Thank you