Please someone correct my letter-asap -Many Thanks

I am Turkish Lady married with English men. We have 14 months old boy, Alan



I am working a private company as a business analyst. My husband is a body shop manager in Toyota. Both of us working full time.



My mother in low has been looking after Alan in last 9 months.

Alan is walking now and he is just about to talk. He is very happy and active little boy. His grandmother can’t cope with him anymore. We are looking someone to help her to care of him.



You will be working 5 hours a day. Mainly, My mother in low will be responsible from Alan’s care. I am working 8am to 4.30 pm. I will be at home about 5 to

5.15 pm

You will be look after Alan between 7.30am to 10am and 4pm to until I came home.

My mother in low is leaving near by us everyday she will have Alan between from 10 am to 4 pm and might be you need to do some add job around the house like unloaded dishwasher or do some ironing.



We are leaving 3 bedrooms bungalow. You will have your private room. There will be TV and Pc in your room and you will be access the Internet. We will pay you 65 pound weekly and all your needs will provided by us. You will be off college day and weekends. Might be sometimes you will be babysitter for us .it is not more than one night in a week.



There are all the level English class is in Brookland College that is 4 minis by train. The train station and bus stop 5 mints walks from our house. West Byfleet a small village but still have lots of nice restaurants and pub and wine bar. Also there is a small library.



Woking is nearest town centre by train 5 mint bus 15 minis. In the town centre you can find most high street shops. Also There are cinema and theather and big a leisure centre available.





We are speaking British English at home however I hope being an other Turkish at home will help your adaptation. I will help your English when you need my help.







We are looking forward to seeing from you soon





Best Regards