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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Please someone correct my English - Thanks

Hi Lucy,

I hope you are well ?

Sorry to hear that your interview wasn’t successful. But do not forget , If you get invite for interviews is very good signed . Stay Positive !

My news is not very good either . I had call from My friend . He opened the restaurant in knaphill last Wednesday. But he said he spent lots of many that he did not budget for shop.

Therefore He cannot effort to employee someone , other than kitchen staff . He is wife is going to help him next couple of months. Than if they doing well he will look for someone to run the place again . He said sorry to both of us .

Now , We are working with Demon recruitment and I have mention you to lady call Ann . She is expecting email from you .Send your Cv and mention my name Zara Goode

She hopefully do something.
  

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Correction please .. Instead of "get invite for interviews " you can use... if you are called for interviews its a very good sign .

  • Correction please ..
  • Instead of "get invite for interviews " you can use...
  • if you are called for interviews its a very good sign .
  • I had a call ..
  • he said due to not budgeting it very well he ended up over spending ..
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Correction please ..

Instead of "get invite for interviews " you can use... if you are called for interviews its a very good sign .

I had a call ..

he said due to not budgeting it very well he ended up over spending .. or he went beyond his budget !

therefore he cant afford an employee .

his wife is going to help him..

i mentioned Ann to you ,c
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angel fariCorrection please ..
Instead of "get invite for interviews " you can use... if you are called for interviews its a very good sign .
I had a call ..
he said due to not budgeting it very well he ended up over spending .. or he went beyond his budget !
therefore he cant afford an employee .
his wife is going to help him..
i mentioned Ann to
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Thank you very much for your help

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