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Please someone correct my english - Many Thanks
0 Hi Helen, 02 br
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00 I went to Istanbul with mother in low for a week end of November. 02 br
00 We had a really nice time there. I and my family did everything we cloud to keep her happy. I believe we managed so well, now we are best friends each other 02 br
00 When I back from Antalya I took another a week off for 02 br
00 the study (by the way passed two of my exam and failed one) I think two weeks later I had call from my mum that my brother had a very small accident he has several broken ribs but his ok at the moment etc . 02 br
00 Even now I cant remember how she finished the story I decide go immediately Thanks for My husband and everybody in my office that they really support me that point and let me to go and see him. 02 br
00 When I went there I found out that actually wasn’t accident .After work he was walking to train station about 7'is, some youth group stopped him for lights than grab his bag and ask his money. I think he tried stopped them and they attacked him. He end up in hospital two stabbed wound on his left leg and four broken ribs smashed face. 02 br
00 When I saw him in the hospital I didn’t believe my eyes. He was 02 br
00 looking absolutely awful .My mum and my two sister of course his wife had most awful time. A young guy saw him on street bleeding, he lost a lot blood ,We cloud have lost him . 02 br
00 My mum and my sisters realy need some kind support so I did not want to leave them like that and I decided to stayed with them three weeks 02 br
00 I was back home at Christmas time I did not enjoy Christmas at all I did want to talk any one, I was in such bad mood long time .Fortunately He is doing fine now But it was unforgetable experiences for all of us . 0-
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00 I went to Istanbul with mother in low for a week end of November. 02 br
00 We had a really nice time there. I and my family did everything we cloud to keep her happy. I believe we managed so well, now we are best friends each other 02 br
00 When I back from Antalya I took another a week off for 02 br
00 the study (by the way passed two of my exam and failed one) I think two weeks later I had call from my mum that my brother had a very small accident he has several broken ribs but his ok at the moment etc . 02 br
00 Even now I cant remember how she finished the story I decide go immediately Thanks for My husband and everybody in my office that they really support me that point and let me to go and see him. 02 br
00 When I went there I found out that actually wasn’t accident .After work he was walking to train station about 7'is, some youth group stopped him for lights than grab his bag and ask his money. I think he tried stopped them and they attacked him. He end up in hospital two stabbed wound on his left leg and four broken ribs smashed face. 02 br
00 When I saw him in the hospital I didn’t believe my eyes. He was 02 br
00 looking absolutely awful .My mum and my two sister of course his wife had most awful time. A young guy saw him on street bleeding, he lost a lot blood ,We cloud have lost him . 02 br
00 My mum and my sisters realy need some kind support so I did not want to leave them like that and I decided to stayed with them three weeks 02 br
00 I was back home at Christmas time I did not enjoy Christmas at all I did want to talk any one, I was in such bad mood long time .Fortunately He is doing fine now But it was unforgetable experiences for all of us . 0-
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0 I put all corrections in CAPITAL letters 02 br 02 br 00 I went to Istanbul with MY mother in LAW for a weekend IN November. 02 br 00 We had a really nice time there. MY FAMILY AND I did everything we COULD to keep her happy.
- 0 I put all corrections in CAPITAL letters 02 br 02 br 00 I went to Istanbul with MY mother in LAW for a weekend IN November.
- 02 br 00 We had a really nice time there.
- MY FAMILY AND I did everything we COULD to keep her happy.
- I believe we managed TO DO SO, AND now we are best OF FRIENDS.
- 02 br 00 When I GOT back from Antalya I took another a week off 02 br 00 TO study (by the way, I passed two of my examS and failed one) I think two weeks later I GOT A call from my mum that my brother HAD had a very MINOR accident.
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0 I put all corrections in CAPITAL letters 02 br
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00 I went to Istanbul with MY mother in LAW for a weekend IN November. 02 br
00 We had a really nice time there. MY FAMILY AND I did everything we COULD to keep her happy. I believe we managed TO DO SO, AND now we are best OF FRIENDS. 02 br
00 When I GOT back from Antalya I took another a week off 02
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00 I went to Istanbul with MY mother in LAW for a weekend IN November. 02 br
00 We had a really nice time there. MY FAMILY AND I did everything we COULD to keep her happy. I believe we managed TO DO SO, AND now we are best OF FRIENDS. 02 br
00 When I GOT back from Antalya I took another a week off 02
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0 Here are some grammar, punctuation and spelling corrections for you. You may feel they are a little "strict". However, written and spoken English are necessarily a little different, since the "writer" is not there to explain what he means 00 ...more detail is needed as well as separating the writing into paragraphs that contain the different subjects that you are talking about. 02 br
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GuestHi Helen,
I went to Istanbul with mother in law for a week at the end of November.
We had a really nice time there. I and my family did everything we could to keep her happy. I believe we managed so well, now we are best friends each other
When I am back from Antalya i took another week off for
the study (by the way passed two of my exam an
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I went to Istanbul with my mother-in-law for a weekend in November.
We had really a nice time there. I and my family did everything we cloud to keep her happy. I believe we managed well so now, we are good friends with each other.
When I was back from Antalya, I took another a week off for
the study (by the way, passed two of my exam, and failed one). I think, two weeks later, I
We had really a nice time there. I and my family did everything we cloud to keep her happy. I believe we managed well so now, we are good friends with each other.
When I was back from Antalya, I took another a week off for
the study (by the way, passed two of my exam, and failed one). I think, two weeks later, I
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