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Newkhushbo Posted 12 years ago
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Please someone correct my below Paragraph

Hey guys how are you? hope you all fine. today we have open a new restaurant and we invite you all to come here and join our party. Thanks
  

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newkhushbo Hey guys how are you? hope you all fine. today we have open a new restaurant and we invite you all to come here and join our party.

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  • newkhushbo Hey guys how are you?
  • hope you all fine.
  • today we have open a new restaurant and we invite you all to come here and join our party.
  • Thanks To make it sound somewhat like an official invitation, I would say this: You are cordially invited to join the celebration of the grand opening of our new restaurant.
  • Come see us, and enjoy the party, music, and good food.
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newkhushbo Hey guys how are you? hope you all fine. today we have open a new restaurant and we invite you all to come here and join our party. Thanks
To make it sound somewhat like an official invitation, I would say this:
You are cordially invited to join the celebration of the grand opening of our new restaurant. Come see us, and enjoy the party, music,
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