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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everybody was born with their own talents and skills to do something in particular or to work in specific areas as sport or music. Nowadays, we can see a million of talent involved in these areas, people born with a great talent, as Mozart and Beethoven for the music, and others that are really well-known because they received an excellent training.
It is true that for both typologies of people a long training is required, but for some genious or champions, in music and sports, as Mozart or Maradona, they were born to cover this role because of their great talent. So a long training was not requiered for them.
On the other hand for the other kind of people, not genious but ordinary people, they can be taught to become a good sports person or musician, but good results can be obtained only through a good an long training. Nowadays areas as music and sport are full of ordinary but good sports person or musician. We can think about the million of music bands that there are all around the world, and they have a great success and even they are well-known, but this point does not concern that they are genious and they were born with this talent, it is only due to for their long and good training.
To sum up briefly i think that everyone can be taught to become a good member in every kind of areas especially if someone lives in special condition, for example the future of the Bill Gates' son could be already written, but this does not mean that he will be so great and famous as his father. Only the people with great talent will be the best and well-known until the end of the days.
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Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everybody was born with their own talents and skills to do something in particular or to work in specific areas as sport or music. Nowadays, we can see a million of talent involved in these areas, people born with a great talent, as Mozart and Beethoven for the music, and others that are really well-known because they received an excellent training.
It is true that for both typologies of people a long training is required, but for some genious or champions, in music and sports, as Mozart or Maradona, they were born to cover this role because of their great talent. So a long training was not requiered for them.
On the other hand for the other kind of people, not genious but ordinary people, they can be taught to become a good sports person or musician, but good results can be obtained only through a good an long training. Nowadays areas as music and sport are full of ordinary but good sports person or musician. We can think about the million of music bands that there are all around the world, and they have a great success and even they are well-known, but this point does not concern that they are genious and they were born with this talent, it is only due to for their long and good training.
To sum up briefly i think that everyone can be taught to become a good member in every kind of areas especially if someone lives in special condition, for example the future of the Bill Gates' son could be already written, but this does not mean that he will be so great and famous as his father. Only the people with great talent will be the best and well-known until the end of the days.
Please i'll be really greatful if someone can correct my essay and tell me what possible score i could take with this one.
thank you so much for your disponibility and ask me everything you want.
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Everybody is born with their own talents and skills to do something in particular or to work in specific areas as sports or music. Nowadays, we can see lots of talent in these areas. People born with great talent, like Mozart and Beethoven for the music, and other celebrities who became well-known due to their meticulous hardwork and training.
- Everybody is born with their own talents and skills to do something in particular or to work in specific areas as sports or music.
- Nowadays, we can see lots of talent in these areas.
- People born with great talent, like Mozart and Beethoven for the music, and other celebrities who became well-known due to their meticulous hardwork and training.
- It is true that for both types of people a lot of training is required, but in cases of prodigies like Mozart and Maradona, they rose to fame because of their great talent, not requiring to work as hard.
- For the other kind of people, the ordinary ones, they can be taught to become a good sports persons or musicians, but good results can be obtained only through good and long training.
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Everybody is born with their own talents and skills to do something in particular or to work in specific areas as sports or music. Nowadays, we can see lots of talent in these areas. People born with great talent, like Mozart and Beethoven for the music, and other celebrities who became well-known due to their meticulous hardwork and training.
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