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Please somebody review my "After Job Interview Letter"

0 Hi There!!!, 02br
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00I am a graduate south American engineer searching for an entry position. I would like somebody review my letter. I had the job interview last week. Pro : I felt connection with the interviewer (my future boss). He liked I have energy and that I am coming from another country where the people work very hard. Con: he thought that I would need some time to update my technical knowledge. 02br
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00Thanks in Advance, 02br
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00Mr. ***, 02br
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00I am excited about your job offer, and I am confident that my learning skills, electronic background, knowledge, and experience of international telecommunication practices will help you achieve your objectives and will allow me to expand my knowledge, skills and satisfied my ambitions. I know small companies are risky but with good managment and high-qualify staff you can growth as far as you can imagine. Therefore, working in this very productive country in this entry position would be a unique opportunity I will always apreciatte. 02br
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00I look forward to discussing a possible professional affiliation with Action Company. 02br
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00Thanks for your consideration, 02br
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00Yours Sincerely, 02br
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00RRVE 02br
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0 Dear Mr. ***, 02br 02br 00I am excited about your offer of a position with your company. I am confident that my learning skills, electronic background, knowledge, and experience of international telecommunication practices will help you achieve your objectives and will allow me to expand my knowledge and skills, and ultimately to achieve my ambitions.

  • 0 Dear Mr.
  • ***, 02br 02br 00I am excited about your offer of a position with your company.
  • I am confident that my learning skills, electronic background, knowledge, and experience of international telecommunication practices will help you achieve your objectives and will allow me to expand my knowledge and skills, and ultimately to achieve my ambitions.
  • 02br 02br 00I appreciate that small companies are risky but with good managment and highly-qualified staff the possibilities are endless.
  • Therefore, to work in an entry position in this very productive 01i 00company02i 00 would be a unique opportunity which I would always apreciate.
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0 Dear Mr. ***, 02br
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00I am excited about your offer of a position with your company. I am confident that my learning skills, electronic background, knowledge, and experience of international telecommunication practices will help you achieve your objectives and will allow me to expand my knowledge and skills, and ultimately to achieve my ambitions. 02br
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