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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please some one check this short paragraph

Hello,
I 'd like to visit turkey.Because I like their people and their culture.It looks utterly like ours.(it likes ours,/looks like ours).The country are full of archeologies.I like to visit Ebrahim's birthplace as near as possible.Turkey 's nature is so beautiful as if the painter painted them.Actually It is,God painted it very artistic..I love olive oil .I heard there was a lot of cans of olive oil.One day I walk the streets there and buy a lot of them.

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I tried to modify yours as little as possible to maintain your style. I personally would say completely instead of utterly and I'm not sure what you intended by "near". Best wishes, hope this helps: I'd like to visit T urkey b ecause I like its people and its culture.

— Shawn79

  • I tried to modify yours as little as possible to maintain your style.
  • I personally would say completely instead of utterly and I'm not sure what you intended by "near".
  • Best wishes, hope this helps: I'd like to visit T urkey b ecause I like its people and its culture.
  • It looks utterly like ours.
  • The country is full of archeolog y .
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I tried to modify yours as little as possible to maintain your style. I personally would say completely instead of utterly and I'm not sure what you intended by "near". Best wishes, hope this helps:

I'd like to visit Turkey because I like its people and
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Thanks for swift reply.

By near, I mean I 'd like to visit it "from near " /live .Actually I'm looking for a word .I have no idea.
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I'd like to visit Ebrahim's birthplace in person?-- But 'visit' itself carries that meaning: to visit something, you must go there. Simply: I'd like to visit Ebrahim's birthplace.
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I'm still not certain of the intent but might you mean: "I'd like to visit the area closest to Ebrahim's birthplace."
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