Please some one chech my Motivation letter

1b00Am writing this motivation letter for PhD scholarship..02b02br
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01b00Dear Sir/Madam,02b02br
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00I am Yousef Alyazji from Gaza Strip/ Occupied Palestine, working in00 00a governmental organization in the field of developmental Projects . I graduate from Political science and public administration department from Middle East Technical University/ Turkey. I am also a new graduate with a Master degree in Management and business administration (MBA) from North Verging / USA. I have accomplished a research study in human resource management under the title of: "Training Effectiveness".02br
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00 00I would like to apply for A PhD program at your university.02br
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00During my work here, I have come across with management tasks, which made me always so interested to work in issues dealing with human rights. I was involved in several tasks within modern aspects of management, and I am so interested to further develop my knowledge, skills, and experience.00 02br
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00But in my country, unfortunately, there are very few opportunities in this area, in which it is difficult to enhance my potential. The chance to attend such course there,00 00was like a dream for me. Encouraged by colleagues and my supervisors, I decided to apply for you training session.02br
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00My plans are to continue working hard in developing my skills and to accomplish as much as possible in the field of modern management strategies, in order to participate in the reform and developmental process of my occupied country. Also, I believe that this training course will have positive impact on me for the benefit of developing my society, which we are still struggling to get its missing freedom.02br
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00I look forward to having a chance to use my theoretical knowledge practically. 02br
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00Besides, I like to travel. I like your country, and during these days,00 00I have learned a lot about her history and culture to better understand your culture. I am also fluent in English, Arabic and Turkish. My previous working experience helped me to easily adapt to a new environment 00 00within multicultural organization. Moreover, I have also learned the commitment necessary to succeed as an individual and as a member of a team.02br
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00Considering my qualifications and interests outlined above, I very much hope that you will consider me for a accepting me to grasp this chance and attend your training. 02br
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00Yours faithfully,0-