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Fragile Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Please smbd check my motivation letter :)

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00I have to send to one university very short motivation letter for participation in one project. As I'm from Lithuania my English is not excellent, please smb check this letter and correct my mistakes ... 02br
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01i00Motivation Letter for ..... project02i02br
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01i00 Dear Sir or Madam,02i02br
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01i00I would like to apply for ..... program.02i02br
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01i00As I am going to be a high-school graduate next year I started wondering about different universities both in Lithuania and abroad. I believe that person cannot trip up in choosing his future. All my life I was interested in Maths but I have never wanted to study it, that is why I have chosen to relate my life with Economics that looks more attractive for me. 02i02br
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01i00There are many reasons why I would like to participate in your program. First of all,02i02br
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01i00student shadow project is excellent chance for me to try to be a student of .... for one day. Also, it is good opportunity to see your teaching ways, atmosphere inside, to deny/prove talk about this university. Thirdly, if I applied for ..... after a year it could be a good motivation for me.02i02br
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01i00 I know that any participation in any project all the time brings any experience for life. This is why I always try to be at the end of one’s resources. 02i02br
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01i00Looking forward to hearing from you soon.02i02br
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01i00Yours sincerely,02i02br
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0 01table 01tr 01td 05000 02td 01td 02br 02br 01i 01font 00Hi Fragile - this needs a bit of work, I think. 02font 02i 02br 02br 01i 00 Dear Sir or Madam,02i 02br 02br 01i 01b 00Motivation Letter for ..... project02b 02i 02br 02br 01i 00I would like to apply for .....

— Lil' Ruby Rose

  • 0 01table 01tr 01td 05000 02td 01td 02br 02br 01i 01font 00Hi Fragile - this needs a bit of work, I think.
  • 02font 02i 02br 02br 01i 00 Dear Sir or Madam,02i 02br 02br 01i 01b 00Motivation Letter for .....
  • project02b 02i 02br 02br 01i 00I would like to apply for .....
  • 02i 02br 02br 01i 00As I am going to 01font 00graduate from02font 00 high-school next year, I 01font 00have begun thinking about02font 00 different universities both in Lithuania and abroad.
  • ]02font 00 Economics that looks more attractive 01font 00to02font 00 me.
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01i01font00Hi Fragile - this needs a bit of work, I think. It's quite hard to follow what you mean in places.02font02i02br
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0Thank you very much... it is sad that my english is soooo horrible.. I'll have to work harder... 05000 thanks.010id1
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0Not at all, Fragile - it was a good first draft. 01b01u00Please02u02b00 don't be discouraged - and please be confident in posting it again if you want someone to have a look at your next draft.02br
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