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Yeganeh Posted 13 years ago
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Please Simplifty!

Hi,
I was reading an abstract of an article, but that was very odd and hard to understand to me, would you please help me to simplify and make it easier? My main problems are the underlined words!

"Customer retention (CR), loyalty (CL), and satisfaction (CS) are important (intermediate) goals for telecommunication network operators on their way to superior economic success in the liberalised German market. Therefore, drawing on a sample of 684 residential customers of digital cellular network operators in Germany this study tests hypotheses suggesting that CR, CL, and CS should be treated as differential constructs which are causally inter-linked. LISREL analyses support a two-staged model in which overall CS has a significant impact on CL which in turn influences a customer's intention to terminate/extend the contractual relationship with his mobile cellular network operator (=CR). Mobile service price and personal service benefit perceptions as well as (lack of) number portability between various cellular operators were identified as supply-related variables with the strongest effects on CR. Mobile network operators’ perceived customer care performance had no significant impact on CR. The findings suggest that an important lever for regulators to promote competition in cellular markets is the enforcement of efficient number portability procedures between mobile network operators."

Thanks!
  

Top answer

This is very dense and abstract. I am not sure the writer knows exactly what he wants to say. However, let me try to reword these sentences to make them plainer.

  • This is very dense and abstract.
  • I am not sure the writer knows exactly what he wants to say.
  • However, let me try to reword these sentences to make them plainer.
  • Therefore, drawing on a sample of 684 residential customers of digital cellular network operators in Germany this study tests hypotheses suggesting that CR, CL, and CS should be treated as differential constructs which are causally inter-linked.
  • This study tests the suggestion that CR, CL, and CS are not separate factors but that they form a chain where one factor determines the next.
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This is very dense and abstract. I am not sure the writer knows exactly what he wants to say. However, let me try to reword these sentences to make them plainer.

Therefore, drawing on a sample of 684 residential customers of digital cellular network operators in Germany this study tests hypotheses suggesting that CR, CL, and CS should be treated as differential constructs
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Very helpful! Thanks a lot!

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