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MN-Red Devil Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

please see my grammar mistakes...^^

I'm wondering if I make a clear sentence following one.

Thanks in advance.





"Even the request of non-degree student in food science to proof that my poor performance in chemistry was caused from my academic motivation, not my talent, also did not allow by the committee since they have not done it before and they were cautious about doing it. "
  

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Hi again, I still don't understand. Try to say it in several simpler sentences. Clive

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Hi again,

I still don't understand. Try to say it in several simpler sentences.

Clive
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>the request of non-degree student in food science
the request of non-degree student status in food science

>did not allow by the committee
was not allowed by the committee

First, get some short sentences correct. Only then, get to longer ones.
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Hi, Clive and Hancu
I really thank u for your kindness and tried to make several simple sentences as you recommended.
Please let me know any your comments on my work. And then I'll mix them up ^^
Thank you again,
red-devil


"Even the request of non-degree student in food s
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Hi again,

Since, the graduate study committee in food science denied my transfer application because of poor GPA, I actually wish to proof that my poor performance in chemistry was caused from my academic motivation, not my talent.

However any international student should register certain courses to keep their visa status in the
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Dear Clive:

I very appreciate for your warm-hearted comments and response.

Thanks you again and Have a great day...

Regards,
Hosik



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