Please rewrite my writing

Topic: Write a paragraph about a new experience you are having. May be you are living in a new country, taking a new class, or working at a new job. Describe the situation. How is it different from what you usually do? How do you feel in the situation? (150 word)

My paragraph:

My new house was built completely in March of 2020. It was a beautiful house with two floors and a lovely garden on the top of it. My family was very excited when we arranged the furniture in our house. We spent a lot of time together to give many ideas to decorate every room. My brother loved books so much, so he decided to put two big bookshelves in his room. Sewing clothes is one of my mom's hobbies, then she spent a room to contain her sewing machine and cloth. The room has a lot of colors from the cloth that made me feel relax when I go in to the room. I liked to knitting dolls in my free time, and I have a glass cabinet to show them. I am very joyful when I saw my handmade dolls, they were beautiful. But the thing made me really happy that our family spent our time working in the garden. There were many kinds of vegetables which we planted, and their cool green makes us feel good. I really enjoyed the experience in our new house.