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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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0 Hi, 02 br
00 Can you please give me your version of: 02 br
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00 " If you're thinking about intertional success with a foreign song, It is a wise move to translate it to english. 02 br
00 You will have more success with english if you're thinking to go internationally than any foreign language. " 02 br
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00 I have to make a statement about ' International success of Foreign songs " 02 br
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00 Can you please give me your version of: 02 br
02 br
00 " If you're thinking about intertional success with a foreign song, It is a wise move to translate it to english. 02 br
00 You will have more success with english if you're thinking to go internationally than any foreign language. " 02 br
02 br
00 I have to make a statement about ' International success of Foreign songs " 02 br
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00 Thanks 0-
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0 The two sentences say about the same thing. One of them would be enough. 0-
- 0 The two sentences say about the same thing.
- One of them would be enough.
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0 The two sentences say about the same thing. One of them would be enough. 02 br
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00 The second one reads better: You will have more success with English than with any other language if you're thinking to go international. 0-
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00 The second one reads better: You will have more success with English than with any other language if you're thinking to go international. 0-
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