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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

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Dear....
We are really sorry for delay in response. We looked your catalogues and some items were approved by our commercial team. But what is certain are high prices of your watches in a way that we believe your products cannot compete with famed Swiss made watches in Brazil’s market due to their high prices. Despite this matter we may have cooperation if you advise us with these questions.
1. How much percent discount you can offer on your watches to the distributors?
2. What are your payment terms?
We are looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
  

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Dear.... , We are very sorry for the delay in our response. We have looked through your catalogues and some items were selected by our sales team.

  • Dear....
  • , We are very sorry for the delay in our response.
  • We have looked through your catalogues and some items were selected by our sales team.
  • However, the prices of your watches , we believe, do not allow them to be competitive with Swiss watches in Brazil’s market.
  • What discount can you offer on your watches to the distributo rs and what are your payment terms?
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Dear....,

We are very sorry for the delay in our response. We have looked through your catalogues and some items were selected by our sales team. However, the prices of your watches, we believe, do not allow them to be competitive with Swiss watches in Brazil’s market. What discount can you offer on your watches

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