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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Please revise the paragraph

I don't know if it is natural to use 'on paper' this way? Is there anything unnatural in the paragraph?

When the Los Angeles Lakers face off against the Los Angeles Clippers on the Clippers home-court. The only thing the that changes is the court's design and logo. Other than that, they both play in the same arena. Even if it's a Clipper home game, half the fans present are for the Lakers. Both teams play each other twice, each on their home-court once for on paper. On paper, each team is at home once. It is just a nuance. Both times, both teams will be on their home-court but with the other teams court design.

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When the Los Angeles Lakers face off against the Los Angeles Clippers on the Clippers ' home court , t he only thing the that changes is the court's design and logo. Other than that, T hey both play in the same arena. Even if it's a Clipper home game, half the fans there are for the Lakers.

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  • When the Los Angeles Lakers face off against the Los Angeles Clippers on the Clippers ' home court , t he only thing the that changes is the court's design and logo.
  • Other than that, T hey both play in the same arena.
  • Even if it's a Clipper home game, half the fans there are for the Lakers.
  • The two teams play each other twice a season , each on its home court once for on paper .
  • and o n paper, each team is at home once , but it is just a technicality .
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When the Los Angeles Lakers face off against the Los Angeles Clippers on the Clippers' home court, the only thing the that changes is the court's design and logo. Other than that, They both play in the same arena. Even if i
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