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Debangkok Posted 17 years ago
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Please revise my comment.

Dear all

Please vevise my comment on the website of MBA program, the datail as below

I would like to comment on the section of What students say about us? which the section of view of old student of this program and I would like to change those old student because thay are so old (1st batch).

I have visit your website recently, I would like to suggest that your section of What student sat about us should change to be the newer old students that that.

Best regards

kk bi
  

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I visited your website recently, and I would like to suggest that your section on 'what students said about us ' should be changed to reflect the comments of the more recent former students . The first batch of comments are extremely old.

— Mister Micawber

  • I visited your website recently, and I would like to suggest that your section on 'what students said about us ' should be changed to reflect the comments of the more recent former students .
  • The first batch of comments are extremely old.
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I visited your website recently, and I would like to suggest that your section on 'what students said about us' should be changed to reflect the comments of the more recent former students. The first batch of comments are extremely old.
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