Please revise me about cover letter for marketing position
Please kind revise me about my cover letter for marketing postion as below :
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HR Department
ABB Company
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Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to apply for the marketing Executive position in response to your advertisement in Jobsdb.com.
I graduated from HK and hold a bachelors degree from the faculty of Economics, with a major in Business Economics. I then challenged myself with my own Chiness Food business. This gave me a great opportunity to enhance my entrepreneurship.
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