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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In recent years, the number of movies are increasing bit by bit. Therefore, watching films is an indispensable hobby for many people. Some individuals think that now we can see films on electrical appliances, and going to the cinema is not necessary. In contrast, some say that it is better to enjoy a movie at the movie theater because it is more stimulating. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, watching films on our tablets and phones are very convenient, we can see films at any time that we want. I usually use my phone to watch a film whenever I have free time. If something happen I will stop and later I can watch my movie again. Also this way is cheap, each month I just need to pay 10$, then many films on the phones are spent for me! Besides that, there is no attachment of food when I watch films at home with my phone, I can eat anything that I want from ice cream to a bowl of soup.

On the other hand, I also like going to the movie theater. Especially with friends, the space of cinema is designed for meetings of couples or groups. I remember once, my friends and I went to the cinema to watch “Jumanji”, it was so a funny and excited hangout because the food at that place was very delicious. In addition, the sound, the big screen with the film were so wonderful that we did not leave our seat just one minute. If we watched at home, we would not have amazing experiences like that because the TV and the sound were not as good as equipments at the movie theater.

In conclusion, I like to see movies on my tablets and phones because they are cheap and easy for me, but I also love going to the cinema with my friends and cousins. Both are good to fully enjoy at different times.