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Moonrise Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please, review this paragraph.

Hi teachers,

Could you check this paragraph, please?

Swinging on the swing, Maria stumbled and fell out. She was admitted to the hospital for a preliminary investigation. Nothing was serious; nevertheless, she was in pain. The pain happened at times and gone at other times throughout the day.

1-Does it make sense?

2-Is it correct if I use "Fell" or "Fell down" instead of "Fell out"? (I mean to use them interchangeably.)

3-Regarding the last sentence, is it correct If I say "The pain happened at times and faded at other times during the day"?



Thanks in advance

  

Top answer

Hi teachers, Could you check this paragraph, please? Swinging on the swing, Maria stumbled and fell offut. She was admitted to the hospital for a preliminary investigation.

— Clive

  • Hi teachers, Could you check this paragraph, please?
  • Swinging on the swing, Maria stumbled and fell offut.
  • She was admitted to the hospital for a preliminary investigation.
  • Nothing was serious; nevertheless, she was in pain.
  • The pain happened at times and gone at other times throughout the day.
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Hi teachers,

Could you check this paragraph, please?

Swinging on the swing, Maria stumbled and fell offut. She was admitted to the hospital for a preliminary investigation. Nothing was serious; nevertheless, she was in pain. The pain happened at times and gone at other times throughout the day.

1-Does it make sense?

2-Is it correct if I use "Fell

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